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Love Is;

Love is when you care more about someone else's happiness than your own,
You would do anything for them,
You'd rather be with them than anyone else in the world,
You would die so they could live,
When you lose them it feels like you lose yourself,
They're the only thing you can ever think of,
You never even dream of being with anyone else, because they're everything you want,
They have many faults, but you're blind to them,
You would take them back no matter what they do,
When you're with them it's the happiest times of your life,
but when you're without them it feels like there is this great big hole in you
You always wanna be in their arms,
Everything reminds you of them,
You miss them the second they leave,
you're always worried about them
there is something in you just burning so deeply
you cannot even begin to describe it
you want to be the one they turn to
you want to be the one they trust
they can hurt you so much
but you choose to pretend that they don't
just in case it would hurt them or your relationship
no matter what, they mean the world to you
and you always want to protect them
you wish you could take their pain from them
even if it means feeling it yourself
they do not have to return your love for you to feel this way
They make your life complete
and you cannot imagine them not being in it
one of the ways that I'd describe true love...
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thisisnataliesweet Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
this is just beautiful
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EnclaveMaven Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016  Professional Writer
This is..just... amazing

DeltaMaven
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kittenroseabby Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Heartbreakingly accurate.
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Charizards-Friend Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
Correct!!!! :DDD
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average-wierdo Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you got it spot on
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EatherEternal Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you are so frickin right, thank you for putting it in beautiful words
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TheInkheart Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful! :heart: I really love it! ;w; Hehe, you described it perfectly, my dear, and it is so beautifully true! :love:
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f0xal1ve Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow.... I searched love in the search bar because I am looking for the words to describe how I feel right now. I have a girl I love so much. I want to take her pain, I want to always be there for her, I am so happy when I am with her. This poem captures exactly what I am feeling. I am adding this to favorites because it touched me and my situation. Great work.
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Libertades Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Every single word, is true.
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CapriciousLife Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Well I call all of the above for my crush :/ true shiz dat is, btw awsome stuff.
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
Very sweet!!!:heart:
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Minthuu Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
And I agree. That...... it's very beautiful. And very sweet.
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bakuragirl257 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
this is the way i feel about my girlfriend
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Psycho-wolf131 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012   Writer
This is amazing.
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Kkmouse943 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi, i hope you don't mind if i use your poem for my school project, i will credit you. It's an awesome poem, i know exactly how you feel.
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KikiValentine Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
just...so real... <3
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JChairez Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
This is exactly the way I feel about my ex. I'm sure he didn't love me as much as I love him but i still want the best for him, even if it means me having a broken heart.
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wickitjester Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing, and I simply love it.
I was wondering if I could include it in a short story?
Of course all credit will be given to it's writer.
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erarosaimmortal21 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
A beautiful poem :)
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blooddept Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
is it bad that i still feel this way despite it being impossible
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avrillavignefanchic Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Student General Artist
This is how I feel about the guy I love.. I'm sure he doesn't love me the same way because he has a girlfriend but I can't help but love him...
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EnclaveMaven Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016  Professional Writer
Don't... worry... he'll soon see it, true love is always meant to happen... and I believe you and your crush has the true love... give it time...
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Bee89 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
wow this is spot on and i love that so many people have shared their experiences :aww:
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lizzyduhh Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
perfectly put
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PanicsShadow Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
wow.this is amazing!
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Masterofsin666 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Thank you this poem show how I feel for my best friend but at the moment I'm having troubles telling her how I feel.
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happykt Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so true!!!!
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PaintIngMANiAC Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012
This is wonderful, I felt a sense of relief as I read through this. More than anything I have felt last year, this is how I feel this year about my friend, he is so dear to me and I could never describe how I feel about him without drawing blanks or sounding dumb hahaha! Thankyou for writing this it's lovely
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Bree229 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it :D
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LavaDino Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
This is exactly how I feel.. I love it.
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Meekanee Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Student Photographer
amazing piece of work here. and i love how it describes my love for my bf perfectly. its like, dead on how i am. its very good :)
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avidec Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Perfect.
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griever8 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
That was awesome. Seriously, I have no words :')
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iloveyoumango Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
true that true that
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krysta1992 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011
OMG I love this this literally is how I feel about someone like dead on thank u so much 4 writing it its great!!!!!!!
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masayalover78 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011
Thats true, I love a boy in my school and he hates me but I talk to him anyway. It hurts because I try to say things that will make him happy but he never smiles :(
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JackieRB2007 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011
I cried the whole time I read this... It says everything I feel for my ex... I want him back so much it kills me and this says everything I feel for him and much much more... Just amazing.
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crestviewhs96 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011  Student General Artist
exactly
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Clayton67 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Student Photographer
it is the best way
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FreakieGeekie Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is true.
And it's scary as hell.
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Shadow-Blossom888 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
dude....im gunna cry
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cathyxxbby Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
love it :heart:
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Goldenboy91 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is beautiful =)

It's exactly how I fell...

Thanks for writting this
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sea2sea Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011   Writer
I feel a bit like this with several people, but I'm not in love with any of them. I care deeply about them.
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DCSP Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agree 1000%, this piece makes me feel human, and it is also very true where, we're happy that we've found one person to love ^^
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tyler9862 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
very well done. Be the strong advocate for this emotion that makes us HUMAN
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XxXTsukiXxX Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011
This is amazingly true.
But when I read it, it just makes me cry.
Don't get me wrong it's beautiful and true o the highest level, but it makes me think of my own special somebody whom I love and hope he loves me back. He's said he does but given age differances, I won't really know for sure for another 3 months.
Oh the torture
but yeah I think it's great lol
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Eqonosp Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Every word as true as the one before it
:love:
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:iconcookies-n-cream4ever:
This is True, you know how to explain love.

Thank you for making me realize that I love him. Thank you.
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MagellinaFluffQueen Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011
Sad but true...
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