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whenever I'm around you
I feel like I can't breathe
cause whenever I'm around you
I feel like I'm not seen
I don't know how you do it
you make me feel so small
so scared of saying something wrong
so I don't speak at all

your arms are so comforting
with lips that look so kissable
eyes that look so loving
but to them I'm just invisible

I wanna pour my heart out
just tell you how I feel
we could be amazing
this is what could be real:
your hands could link with mine
our hearts and souls could intertwine
everything would be alright
you'd hold me in your arms all night

your arms are so comforting
with lips that look so kissable
eyes that look so loving
but to them I'm just invisible
to them I'm just invisible
to you I'm just invisible
I'm just invisible
I'm invisible
©2008-2010 ~sexc-blonde-angel
:iconsexc-blonde-angel:

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i hate being invisible

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:icondark-tundra-chaos:
Doesn't everybody?
Being invisible sucks.
This was well written.

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:iconxoover-rated:
i know that exact feeling right now.. great job
:iconsexc-blonde-angel:
thx... hope it gets better

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:iconsexc-blonde-angel:
sigh yeah I guess... ah it truly does!!!
hehe thx

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:iconcoolangel:
Awsome!<3 Yeah I'm a bitt invislbal too,so don't feel bad.:hug:

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:iconsexc-blonde-angel:
its kinda hard nt to

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* love lifts us up where we belong*
:iconcoolangel:
yeah..

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**~ Sorry but I don't have the time for thanking for the all faves any longer..(AND the 500 error..) :C So thanks if you ever fave my pice of work!:heart::love: and I'll try my best!!**~
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:iconfelicity2989:
lovely poem, i love the emotions that you feel when you read it, nicely done

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they say i can't live without,
truth be told i can
and one day, i really
won't come back

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