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My Immortal

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I'm so tired of being here
but I just can't seem to leave
Suppressed by all my childish fears
that have been created by you
And if you have to leave
which is your choice
I wish that you would just leave
instead of giving me this false hope
'Cause your presence still lingers here
it haunts me
And it won't leave me alone
I wish you'd just leave me alone

These wounds won't seem to heal
they're all caused by you
This pain is just too real
the hurt is much to deep
There's just too much that time cannot erase
but the memories haunt my soul

[Chorus:]
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
while trying to hide my own
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
while my own greatest was losing you
And I held your hand through all of these years
while you kept trying to push me away
But you still have
All of me
I've always belonged to you

You used to captivate me
honestly you still do
By your resonating light
by your voice once so sweet
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
the love you gave away
Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
your words cannot be forgotten
Your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me
it once healed me now it breaks me
no, I'm not okay
I need you


These wounds won't seem to heal
they're all caused by you
This pain is just too real
the hurt is much to deep
There's just too much that time cannot erase
but the memories haunt my soul

[Chorus]

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
but I always have the hope you'll return
But though you're still with me
in my mind and thoughts
I've been alone all along
cause you were never truly mine
I love the song "my immortal" by evanescence....can relate very much and decided to try edit it :) tell me what u think
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mikka42's avatar
nice adaptation sounds cool